Very bad. Especially given that someone's coming around the corner now. He's a good six-foot-something, blue shirt, brown hat, black vest, gray trousers...
We'd mention that he's wearing fingerless gloves, but given that he's carrying a rifle nearly as long as the distance from armpit to ground, that may not be immediately evident.
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Date: 2008-12-08 01:20 am (UTC)We'd mention that he's wearing fingerless gloves, but given that he's carrying a rifle nearly as long as the distance from armpit to ground, that may not be immediately evident.